This is a remake of one of my older deviations. [link]
The old one have a more celshaded feeling, while my newer one is suppose to add more depth.
Full view please.
Critique welcome. I still want to improve my art.
Wow! This is very nice. I like those clouds and whole feeling on this picture is so dream like. If I had to say something that I didin't like. It is textures of those city roofs. They need more detail. This is undoubtedly worth of :ing.
Tack.
Byggnaderna är gjorda i Bruce 5 en gång i tiden, det är väl därför upplösningen inte blev så bra.
Nope, finns inga berg på denna bilden, bara moln, stad och himmel.
The only problem I can see is that the Antenae? Whatever those things poppin' up are seem to be lit form the forground when the lightsource is definately coming from the back.
Also, is there any possiblity of removing the banding going on in the sky? I think it would be so much prettier if I could see all the stars.
Thank you for the suggestions . I've edited the image a little bit as you can see now.
I fixed the lightsource a little bit on the antenas, and added a small blur filter to them all. I also reduced the atmosphere a bit so I could add some more stars.
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